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This Could Be Paradise

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Request for ~Navakira
of her and her boyfriend's characters
Hope its okay :D
Had alotta fun doing this one :glomp:

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~She ran away in her sleep
and dreamed of
Para-para-paradise, Para-para-paradise, Para-para-paradise
Every time she closed her eyes~
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AwesomelyAimless's avatar
:star::star::star::star: Overall
:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Vision
:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Originality
:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Technique
:star::star::star::star::star-half: Impact

Overall, I really love this piece. You conveyed well the emotions between the two wolves, as well as eye contact. Your technique is good, I like the simple coloring with the slightly more detailed lineart. The only things I would suggest for the future would to include maybe a tree or some sort of object in that blank space on the left to balance out your composition, and to take your time with coloring, I saw a few areas where the brown wolf's color bleeds onto the outside of his lines<img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/s/s…" width="15" height="15" alt=":)" title=":) (Smile)"/> Those are just my suggestions though<img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/s/s…" width="15" height="15" alt=":)" title=":) (Smile)"/>

Great work! Keep it up!